Monday, October 29, 2012

I cannot evaluate right now myself on this 30-min essay 2. I feel I did better on my first essay, which means this time I do not satisfy on my work. The topic should be easier for me based on my knowledge, because I had many researches about smoking couple years ago. Unfortunately, I could not  conclude much information in this essay. I felt I repeated one thing over and over. Also, I worry about total word count. It seemed short. However I wrote four paragraphs, plus concluding part. But I hope my essay is not that bad.

1 comment:

  1. Don't worry too much. I am sure you did fine. You may be frustrated because you know the words in Mongolian to discuss this topic well but you feel that you don't know the words in English. This can be frustrating.

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