Tuesday, October 30, 2012
30-Min Essay Part 2
I feel the second essay's topic was a little harder than first one. Advantages: I wrote more words in first body paragraph, and I can easy to think three ideas very quick. Disadvantages: I didn't use time wisely, I mean my second and third paragraph is to short. I also had vocabulary problems, such as I didn't know how to spell cigarette, lungs, cancer...etc. That problem mad my hard to expand my writing. During the essay, I thought I don't have time to finish, I can't finish!! I did my best, but I still need to practice writing more.
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You do a nice job of evaluating your writing. You know exactly what you need to work on and work hard to improve in those areas. I appreciate your hard work and great attitude.
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